November 1, 2008
Giveaway: Win Tuition for Internet Marketing Copy Makeover
It’s been a little while since we did a sweepstakes/giveaway, hasn’t it? Well, let’s do one today! Up for grabs:
1 FREE Tuition for Internet Marketing Copywriting Makeover
One lucky winner will receive full and complete access to the 4-week IM Copy Makeover Coaching program (valued at $447). This 4-week intensive program shows you how to remodel their existing sales copy (or create brand new copy) for increased response. You’ll be able to hone your copywriting skills through hands-on, practical application. This coaching includes a full and detailed copy critique and plenty of opportunity for follow up.
Here’s How to Enter


Take a look at the coaching information page. If you can use this for your business, move onto step #2.
Write a comment below with your full name, state/province and country stating that you’d like to enter. Please include one sentence (or more) on why you’d like to get your hands on this prize.
Deadline for entry is 10 PM PST Tuesday (November 4, 2008 - Click here to see what time it is in PST).
By random draw, we’ll pick a winner and announce it on Wednesday. You MUST claim your prize within 5 days or we will draw another winner.
Good luck!


I’d like to enter the contest. I have an idea for a coaching program and I’m going to need a lot of help on the copy to get it moving forward.
I would like to enter your contest. I am unemployed at this time and trying to start a business as a virtual assistant. I can’t seem to get started in the right direction and I think your coaching class would really help me, not mention that the copywriting would definitely increase my value to clients.
Hi, Alice! My name is Aimee Koester. I’ve been a follower of yours for a little while now. I live in Maryland, and I’d like to enter your giveaway. I would love to be in the sweetie copywriting class because for one I need all the help I can get. I really think it would add to the sweetie coypwriting course I’ve just finished and help me to further my copy experience. I’ve really been enjoying the copywriting course and know I would enjoy and use this just as much.
Thanks for all the work you do!
I’d like to enter your random giveaway contest. I am unemployed right now and am considering a second career as a copywriter. I like to write and have a health and nutrition blog where I publish articles frequently. So I’d like to learn how to turn words into money!
Thanks for this opportunity,
Gerald
From upstate NY. I think I have the networking stuff figured out since I love people, just can’t seem to sell much of anything. I teach people that they can make a choice to be home and enjoy their families while earning a living online. I have lots of passion and zeal in my message which is yes, YOU can do it and I believe in you but can’t seem to articulate and convey this passion to the SAH mommas that I’d like to reach. Sure could use a leg up in this lack of communication skill. I am confident that when (not if) I implement your techniques my vision will be reality! I have always loved your message of authenticity with sweetness mixed in. Totally resonates w/ me and is what I use when I coach others in how to relate to their clients. It’s nice to know I’m not alone in my win them with honey technique!
Hi Alice,
I would love to win a copywriting makeover. Please pick me. LOL

Hey everyone. Thanks for your entries. Make sure you’re following instructions above.
Hello Alice—
I’ve been subscribed to your newsletter for some time now and thoroughly enjoy it because unlike so many others you offer some real and useable advice. I’ve been trying to get my business started for some time now. Of course, the economy has slowed me down somewhat and has made me really scared of jumping in full speed. I want to open a boutique that sells bath & body products made by all the wonderful people out there who make these products, not the nationally known lines. I want to feature alot of organic/natural products. I also want to sell some other items that are unique and are things most all women would love. I also have an idea for a unique furniture product that I invented 8 yrs ago. This is a product that is mainly targeted to women of all ages but would work for guys also. There is nothing like it on the market at all. I just have to get it completely designed and then make some prototypes. I want to open this boutique here on the island that I live on. Believe it or not, currently there is no where here to buy any kind of good quality bath & body products unless you drive 30 miles to the nearest big city. Even tho this is a small island, it is a big tourist destination as well as home to many, many people most of whom are wealthy. So the market is there. The economy has me scared to death. I am also a master cosmetologist and beauty has been my passion for my whole life (I”m almost 42). I’ve done so much research online as far as marketing, networking, customer service, etc. I’ve also spent alot of time researching all the companies whose products I want to carry. The economy has made me almost give up on opening this biz but it’s my passion and I can’t just let it go. But when it comes to writing an ad, I’m lost. Your course would mean so much to the success of my business. Please choose me and help me get this business going that I’ve put so much into.
Stacie Mahoe
Hawaii, USA
I would love this training because usually by the time I get to the point of doing a sales page, I’m so anxious to get it up I know my sales pages could use a make over. Knowing the key parts to modify would probably help the effectiveness of my existing pages tremendously.
Hello Alice—
I forgot to include my city and state. I live on Amelia Island, Fl in the good ole’ USA.
I would love to get some assistance on my copywriting. I have my Social Media - Virtual Assistance site that I just launched and 1 affiliate squeeze page I would love some assistance with. Please enter me into the contest.
Gilberts, IL
USA
Amy Yowell
Virginia, USA
I would like to get my hands on this prize :-). I have been learning a lot of information over the last few months and I would love to learn copywriting. I would like to be able to write my own copy and I would like to offer it as a service to others and make a career of it.
Hi Alice -
I’d love to be able to do this because your products are awesome and I really struggle with this type of copywriting.
Thanks for your consideration
Lisa Wood
Vermont, USA
Hi Alice. I sure could use this coaching! I’ve NEVER been confident in my sales-copy writing. And for good reason: my conversion rates are borderline pathetic!
Thanks so much for the opportunity!
Cara Mirabella
New Jersey, USA
Hi Alice, I would love to win your contest. I live in Alabama, USA. I need some help in that area and it would be a great benefit for my business and help me to become better at what I do.
I love helping people and want to help them the best way that I can and I think that this course would help me to help them.
I forgot to leave my city and state, so let me try again and get that out of the way: I live in Clovis, NM. I’m starting a coaching program and I will definitely need a lot of help with the copy for that.
Marie Ynami
Redlands, CA
I would love to win your giveaway. I have gone through your Spring Cleaning Coaching a few years ago and I really learned a lot. I would love to learn more about copy writing from you.
It looks like you had a great Halloween Alice. Your costumes were simply adorable!
I live in Arizona, US and would love to learn copywriting from you. Whenever I have to write copy it is very painful and time consuming for me. I spend countless hours trying to put the right words together and never feel completely satisfied with the results.
Your IM Copy Makeover would be just the ticket for me.
Thanks for making this giveaway available to us all.
Hi Alice,
Your blog is very fun and informing to follow.
I live in Loveland, Colorado in the US. I have been studying several of your other courses for some time and I am really struggling with the copy on my site. I feel like I am constantly revising, rewarding and fretting over the statement my site makes.
I would be very grateful if I were the winner of the course!
Maryland, USA
I would like to enter your Giveaway for the Internet Marketing Copy Makeover. This program would help me refine my website and gain the interest of future clients. I hope that I will have the honor of winning this valuable prize.
Hi Alice, I would love your help. Writing copy is the one thing that scares me to death, and because of that I haven’t been able to move forward. I’ll keep my fingers crossed, and thank you for the chance.
I live in Nova Scotia, Canada
Debra Conrad
Arizona USA
Well I feel like I can’t stop with my “Alice” fix. I’ve taken the email coaching and the spring cleaning coaching… so the next logical step would be to take the copywriting makeover coaching.
I learned to do copywriting several years ago… but the copy needs a complete makeover. It’s been my experience that I work best on a project like this with a coach. And Alice has been one of my favorite coaches.
I make it a “practice” to only learn from one coach at a time. This way I don’t have conflicting opinions and my brain doesn’t get so confused. (which is pretty easy for my poor brain to do
So here I am entering a contest… which is never part of the plan. But… when Alice calls for entries… who am I to argue!
Hi Alice,
Yes I’m interested in being in this contest for tuition for your copywriting online class. I live in Winter Garden, FL.
I need this class to help take care of my family and build my business. I am teachable, flexible and dedicated. I am used to meeting deadlines and I am persistent. I have been studying the social media for a while and believe I have what it takes to put your copywriting/marketing plan to work.
thank you,
Loretta
Melissa Ingold
Ontario, Canada
I would love this prize because I believe there is always room for improvement when it comes to writing copy. Not to mention, I could use a refresher
Thanks, Alice!
I would love to win this prize, it will help me in many areas of my internet marketing business.
I am always open to learning new things and this is something that I could use some help in, because it would help to to save me money in the long run.
Hi Alice! This is Stefani in Oklahoma, USA.
I would love to get my hands on a copy of this. I have no product (yet) and sometimes it seems so overwhelming to spend so much time on a product, and then what?? Your IM Copy would give me the boost I need to finish my product, because then I would know that I have the copy to sell it! Thanks for your great contests!
Stefani
Hi Alice, Its Margaret Saunders here from Australia and I’d love
to win your prize as I am doing relatively ok in marketing to my fellow Australians, but I’d love to go to the next level and learn how to become International.
And if you’re good enough for Mike Filsaime, your good enough for me.
Warmly
M<argaret
Oops meant to tick the Notify me of follow up commetns via email box.
Please apply this to the comments I’ve just made.
Hello Alice,
I need this because - I need to make more sales with my site and all my efforts are not getting me there - there is obviously something (or a lot) I am not getting. Would love the guidance of an expert (like yourself) with my problem.
I am from Sydney, Australia.
I am Leslie Valeska of Florida, USA.
In a nutshell, I NEED this one on one help b/c I have no idea what I am doing. I have purchased programs, including the copywrite program and have yet to be able to use them. They always sound like exactly what I need, I am able to use them until they have to be linked in my website. Pathetically, the only thing I have been able to accomplish is setting up a WP blog. I haven’t been able to do one other thing and I am so frustrated I closed my store temporarily because I can’t get anything to work!
Thanks for your conisderation and for the great Giveaway!
I have never seen a cuter bo-peep and her little lamb, but those older sheep, why they have turned into robots! Aaack! LOL!
My fave though is your pup who is dressed as the horseman’s horse! THAT was hilarious!!! Glad you had a great day!
Great prize here! I could really use help with my copy writing skills. I’m actually a fairly good writer….but not at copywriting. I’m totally lost when it comes to this and would love to develop my skills here.
Hi Alice,
This is John Tan from Singapore. I would like to enter to this giveaway.
As English is not my first language therefore when come to writing copy, it have been a tough time for me. With your copywriting coaching program, I am sure I can turn my current 3 products copy into a high conversion copy.
Look forward to hearing you to announce the winner.
Melissa Gordon from Kansas, USA. I would LOVE to get my hands on this goodie for one simple reason: Writing copy for my sites is the single most difficult thing to do. And is frustrating. Help!
Thanks so much for the opportunity.
Hello Alice
You always have some generous opportunities.
I have a membership site that could definately use some help with the text, as well as a FTM membership site that I am working on, and an ebook that I am releasing soon. One can never have enough help! What a wonderful opportunity!
You are a SWEETIE!
Karin Magar
California, USA
I would love to win the spot in your new IM Copy Makeover! I feel that this is the one area I can’t get right (I can’t seem to write good headlines or turn features into benefits) and would love to get real advice on my copy from an expert. HELP!! Thanks so much!
Marilyn Etzel
Texas, USA
The need for improvement is always there. This would definitely become an assest at this time of my business adventures. Thanks for the opportunity to participate and good luck to everyone.
Saskatchewan, Canada
Hi Alice.
Dawn Stegall here from Illinois. The next thing on my to do list is to rewrite my salespage. So talk about perfect timing!
Faithfully,
Dawn
Hi Alice! Thanks for giving me the opportunity to enter another draw for one of your fabulous coaching courses.
I’d really love to win this as despite some good feed back my niche products, ie Wedding Stationary site isn’t bringing in any money!
So far my most successful sales strategy has been word of mouth; but I’d like to change that as I love writing; but I’d like to be able to write really effective copy and make a little money too…
Polly Pierce
Offaly, Ireland
I can’t seem to get started in the right direction and I think your coaching class would really help me.
thanks.
Alice, I would really love to win this as I am just rebuilding my website and need to make it effective in selling my web design services.
Richard Morton, West Midlands, England
Hi,
I would LOVE this great Copywriting Workshop. I’ve been playing with copy/images/text and other things for years on my website, but still cannot get a high enough conversion rate… why? - I think your workshop would REALLY Get Me Moving!
Thanks,
Brett Simpson
South Bend, Indiana, USA
Hello! I’ve been having a little success with providing a service, but now I’d like to scale the business to reach a wider audience and I need help with my copy. I think your coaching would really be great and just what I need.
Lisa Stoops
Michigan, USA
My apologies on the delay…the winner is:
Dawn Stigoni
Dawn, please submit a ticket to http://www.internetbasedsupport.com with the subject line “IM Copy Makeover Winner” and we’ll set you up.
Congrats and thank you everyone!
Okay, I goofed that one up, didn’t I? I kind of combined two names and my cell phone won’t let me log in to fix it. So, I guess we need 2 winners:
Dawn Pigoni
Dawn Stegall
Please follow instructions in above comment.
I am so excited to win. I was wondering about the name spelling. Either way I guess I lucked out and were both from IL - how ironic.
Dawn Pigoni
Oh wow, that is funny. But I’m not complaining!
the other Dawn